Wednesday, December 17, 2008

Flowers for Danielle

She walked out into a field of flowers that spelled Danielle,

Someone who passed away not too long ago - her friend,

The April shower made the green sweatshirt,

cling to her in the mess of tulips

she was in. One by one she cut them with scissors,

and then picked them up out of the dirt with a spoonula.

 

The flowers that were carried by the spoonula,

that were cut by the scissors,

and the arms of the woman carrying the tulips,

rested safely against the green sweatshirt.

The same flowers that represented her friend,

that would soon be placed gracefully by the tombstone named Danielle.

 

She placed the soaked green sweatshirt,

on the floor along with the dirt filled spoonula.

The basket by the door held the tulips,

for the deceased Danielle.

The person she called her friend,

the flowers for her cut by the scissors.

 

The muddy old scissors,

sat on the rug and the sweatshirt,

dripping on the floor, and her friends

flowers being held by the spoonula.

The one for Danielle,

whose favorite flowers were tulips.

 

She gathered the tulips.

Her back pocket safely held the scissors.

On the floor lay the forgotten green sweatshirt,

along with the dirty old spoonula.

She walked along the cobblestone path to her friend,

across the bridge to find the tombstone engraved Danielle.

 

Laying the flowers down for her friend,

on the memorial filled with tulips,

that she carried home with her spoonula.

The same tulips that were cut by the muddy scissors,

that now rest in her pocket, the wet green sweatshirt,

still lay forgotten on the floor, all of this for her beloved friend Danielle.

 

At home she washed the spoonula along with the scissors.

She thought about the tulips for her friend.

While washing the soaked green sweatshirt that was once Danielle’s.

Friday, December 12, 2008

I hate this assignment

I hate this assignment- it is impossible to write

I hate this assignment- it really is impossible to write

If only I had an idea, I would get it done before midnight

 

I wish I was creative, and then it would be a cinch

I wish I was creative, and then it would be a real cinch

I would write about the first thing that comes to mind and it would come together inch by inch

 

I will never get this done without a clue what to do

I will never get this done without a clue what to do

If I could get this done, I wouldn’t be so blue

 

This is really taking forever – I really need a plan

This is really taking forever – I really need a plan

Wait a minute this isn’t so hard, maybe I can.

Tuesday, December 9, 2008

Bluebird

Poet: Charles Bukowski

Poem’s Title: Bluebird

 

What is the structure of this poem?

There are four stanzas. There is no rhyming. The lines get longer and some lines are only one word

 

What are some key patterns you notice as you scan/ skim the poem?

There’s a bluebird in my heart that wants to get out. Whores and cigarettes stood out.

 

New vocabulary words or definitions?

There are none

 

What is happening in this poem? Answer with as many verbs as possible.

Going, inhale, pour, singing, put, sleep, blow, see, and weep. Screw up, mess up, want, let

 

Who is the literary speaker? What is his or her attitude? Don’t use vague terms.

There is a mix attitude between positive and negative. Persona- he sleeps, it is hard for him to love. Something is keeping him down. He drinks (maybe a drunk.) He is an author. He smokes. He doesn’t weep.

 

What are the dominant images that appeal to the five senses? What emotions does the images evoke?

 

Bluebird    happiness

Singing      anger

Crying       sadness

Sleeping    depression

Whiskey

 

What is the poet’s attitude towards his or her subject?

 

The main attitude is depression or sadness. I also think the poet portrayed self-pride in this piece. Maybe the man is someone who doesn’t want to let his guard down in front of other people, but he feels burdened by it each day.

How does the author diction and employment of poetic devices to convey his or her attitude.

He uses repetition and some metaphors such as the blue bird.

 

 

Thursday, December 4, 2008

You Are....

You are the indestructible bat mobile

the paperclip in my pocket holding together a two page book

You are the alarm clock on my dresser

And the answer to the crossword puzzle

You are the perfume in the bottle

And the cherry skittles in the candy dish

 

However, you are not the sour yellow skittles,

The sack of potatoes laying in the bottom of the ‘fridge

Or the fly buzzing around the room

There is just no way you are the fly buzzing around the room

 

It is possible that you are the shoulder that I lean on

Maybe even the legs that I stand on

But you are not even close

To being the mismatched socked on the dryer

 

And a quick look in the mirror will show

That you are neither the dusty books on the shelf

Nor the loser of a race

 

I might interest you to know,

Speaking of the plentiful imagery of the worlds,

That I am the red rose in the cluster of white

 

I also happen to be the mouse in the corner

The first snowflake of winter

And the breath of fresh air

 

I am also the question mark at the end of the page

And the exclamation point at the top

But don’t worry; I’m not the indestructible bat mobile

You will always be the indestructible bat mobile

Not to mention the paper clip that is somehow holding together the two-page book.